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Pokemon Chaos Control Chp 4-Jim's gym battle

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"Nioku,do you think it was right to leave the town and make the commander fix all those devastating repairs ?" ,Naraku asked. "No, it was not, but we need to get to the Striaton City for the first gym battle." ,said Nioku happily. "We are going to win guys ! screamed Jim. Our 3 heroes were anxiously waiting for their first gym battle in Striaton city. "Naraku,how much longer do we hav to walk down this long,winding trail ?" "We have about half a mile to a mile left,I'm not 100% sure." Nioku took the dusty map from Naraku and said, "We are half a mile from Striaton City !" "Yay !" they both screamed. A couple of hours later,they saw the glimmering lights of Striaton City. "We're there !" "Awesome !" "I'm happy !" All 3 of them walked into the city and were greeted strangely, for everyone was staring at them. "Why is everybody staring at us ?" Jim asked. "I don't know Jim,ask Nioku." "Naraku stop it,i don't know either." A person screamed, "Hey,are you from the news ?" "Yes we are !" As soon as they replied to that question, hordes of people trotted down the gravel streets of Striaton and trampled Jim,Naraku and Nioku because of all the commotion. They bombarded with questions like, "How did you survive ?" Or "Are you traumatized by this event ?" This continued until the 3 gym leaders, Cilan,Chili and Cress broke it up. "Naraku ! I haven't seen you in 10 years !" ,Cilan said with a grin on his face "Hey Cilan,how's it been running your gym ? " "It's been hard and kinda boring because we don't get as much battle ready trainers anymore." Naraku said, "Me and my 2 friends are going to rebeat all the 8 gyms of Unova." Chili preceeded to say,"I am honored to accept your challenge and who are these two ?" "I'm Jim ! I was an elite 4 champion of Kanto and she's Nioku champion of the Hoenn elite 4." Nioku with a sense of enthusiasm said, "Nice to meet you." Cilan asked, "Well then who's are first challenger ?" "I am ." Jim replied. Cress then said, "Well then let's go to the gym guys !" They all walked up into the gourmet restauraunt and walked up to the wall. Cilan screamed, "This is where the gym is !" Cilan then pressed a button which caused the wall to retreat,opening up a passageway to the gym. Inside was the stadium,with seats on each side of the battlefield with a section titled, "Sit Here." Naraku and Nioku sat down while Jim preceeded to walk into the trainer's box. "So Jim,which one of us theree leaders will you pick ?" "Uhhh.......I pick you Cilan !" he said. "Good luck Jim,he's tough." Naraku said with assurance. Jim got ready for the battle and once Cilan did, the referee said, "This gym battle between Jim from Viridian City and Cilan the gym leader will now begin ! This will be a 3 on 3 battle and only the challenger will be allowed to make substitutions !" "Ready Cilan ?" Jim asked,victory ablazing in his eyes. "Yes I am ready." he replied. "Come on out Charizard !" screamed Jim. "Pansage,you too !" "Jim,you make the first attack." Cilan said. "Really ? Well then !" "Charizard use flamethrower !" Cilan with a plan concurring in his head screamed, "Pansage use rock slide !" Jim started thinking, "oh shit ! What do i do ?" "Charizard dodge it !" But alast,it was too late. Charizard was hit by Pansage's devastating rock slide. " Like that Jim ? I taught my pansage 4 moves that counter against fire types !" Jim,thinking of what he was doing,told his Charizard to use hyper beam. Charizard was quick and fast with the hyper beam hitting pansage. Pansage fainted and the referee said,"Pansage is unable to battle,Jim is the winner !" "Feeling good Jim ?" Cilan asked. "Yeah I'm doing great !" Jim replied. "Well then i'm going to send ot my next pokemon !" "Combusken,come on out !" Jim recalled his charizard and said, "Empoleon,come on out !" Jim feeling that he was going to win,yelled, "Empoleon,use surf !" And the whole stadiun filled up with water,getting everyone wet,but Combusken somehow dodged it. "Combusken,use flare blitz !" Jim started to think,"Flare blitz does damage to the target so I'll use hydro pump." "Empoleon,use hydro pump !" It was a direct hit causing Combusken to hit the ground like a bullet and faint. "Combusken is unable to battle,Jim is the winner !" the referee screamed. "Are yoi ready for my last pokemon,jim ?" "Yes i am !" Jim said with victory burning in his eyes. "Well then come on out Salamence !" Jim recalled Empoleon and brought out Froslass. "Froslass,huh ? Very good choice Jim !" "Thanks Cilan !" "Froslass use ice beam !" "Salamence,use flamethrower ! "Froslass dodge it !" Froslass dodged the flame thrower landing a hit on Salamence with ice beam. "Impressive Jim,but i must end it here ! Salamence,use giga impact !" "Froslass use ice beam !" Salamence dodged Froslass's ice beam and directly hit Froslass with giga impact. "Froslass !" Jim screamed in fear. "Froslass is unable to battle ! Cilan is the winner !" "Good froslass jim but not a match for my Salamence !" Cilan said with a sense of victory. "Come back out Empoleon !" "Ready Jim ?" "Yes ! Empoleon use drill peck !" "Dodge it Salamence !" Salamence dodged it gracefully like a bird. "Salamence use hyper beam !" "Empoleon use hyper beam as well !" The hyper beams collided causing a massive explosion which hit both Salamence and Empoleon. "Get up Salamence !" "Get up Empoleon !" Both of their pokemon were badly hurt and were struggling to get up. After they were both up, Cilan screamed, "Salamence use hyper beam again !" "You too Empoleon !" And with this,resulted another massive explosion which thsis time fainted both of the pokemon. "Both pokemon are unable to battle ! Jim is the winner and he gets the badge !" "Here is the trio badge,jim !" Said Cilan with joy in his eyes. "Thank you Cilan !" Jim yelled. "Good job jim !" Naraku and Nioku said. Cilan said, " I enjoyed our battle and i look forward to yours Naraku !" With that quote from Cilan, all three of them walked out of the gym......
Chapter 4 !
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mewtwoprettyplzplz's avatar
this was a bit confusing. first of all, i got confused with whose pokemon was whose, and the fact that giga impact is normal and froslass is ghost. but it was still good!